tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6100108633402418161.post3048516786365861652..comments2023-10-06T05:06:35.747-05:00Comments on Just a Man caught between..Ignorance & Bliss: [Fiction] FridayJack Greeninghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04757436266215791856noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6100108633402418161.post-39104403561592401562007-10-06T12:48:00.000-05:002007-10-06T12:48:00.000-05:00Phenomenal! That was an incredible tale. I shall r...Phenomenal! That was an incredible tale. I shall return to read more of your works.<BR/><BR/>Seriously. Just wow.Penhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14007835767017361390noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6100108633402418161.post-27000301601382702442007-10-06T09:18:00.000-05:002007-10-06T09:18:00.000-05:00What an engaging story, Webster - I loved this one...What an engaging story, Webster - I loved this one!josie2shoeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15452791371126155173noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6100108633402418161.post-34610388544006576182007-10-05T10:30:00.000-05:002007-10-05T10:30:00.000-05:00This one is the 4th one on Jack and Jill including...This one is the 4th one on Jack and Jill including mine. I loved every word of yours!gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6100108633402418161.post-42772330004148888152007-10-05T10:28:00.001-05:002007-10-05T10:28:00.001-05:00I recognized a parallel to Stephen King's "The Dea...I recognized a parallel to Stephen King's "The Dead Zone", but I like how differently you took the tale. I can relate to "hate is gone, but so has the love, all that remains is indifference" situation. Well done!~willow~https://www.blogger.com/profile/09458164850031755362noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6100108633402418161.post-37148285951672095032007-10-05T10:28:00.000-05:002007-10-05T10:28:00.000-05:00Thanks everyone but I really wasn't pleased with i...Thanks everyone but I really wasn't pleased with it. How it works for me and I'm not sure if it's kosher but I try to read the prompt early and walk around with it while the story takes form in my head. I then sit down and pour it out on to the page. This story didn,t come out like it sounded in my head.Jack Greeninghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04757436266215791856noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6100108633402418161.post-86623651238119127412007-10-05T07:41:00.000-05:002007-10-05T07:41:00.000-05:00I really really really enjoyed this. I could feel...I really really really enjoyed this. I could feel his pain, his anger, his disorientation.Jodi Cleghornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00808676742258881407noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6100108633402418161.post-14589762563989402032007-10-05T07:38:00.000-05:002007-10-05T07:38:00.000-05:00wow... you walked away from that fairy tale with ...wow... you walked away from that fairy tale with a life story.. this was excellent......paisleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08231453820728399262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6100108633402418161.post-23323709657729567592007-10-05T07:15:00.000-05:002007-10-05T07:15:00.000-05:00Very good, again.Very good, again.Johttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15149139820474072721noreply@blogger.com